SMARTHINKING's E-structor Response Form

(Your marked-up essay is below this form.) HOW THIS WORKS: Your e-structor has written overview comments about your essay in the form below. Your e-structor has also embedded comments [in bold and in brackets] throughout your essay. Thank you for choosing SMARTHINKING's OWL; best wishes with revising your paper! Hi, Erin. My name is Aila W. and I'll be helping you with your essay. I enjoyed reading your description of this criminal. As you requested, I've discussed organization, though I didn't see concern with content development. I've also given you some guidance on your thesis and introduction. *Strengths of the essay: You've clearly done effective research on this case and the legal issues involved. Readers get a good picture of these...