Erin Potts Professor Espinosa CRI 312 September 22, 2011 What was wrong with the report? The writer put R/P instead of writing out reporting party. Also he talked about the suspect as a suspect then referred to him as her ex-husband then has her husband. I dont believe that the officer should have given out any information pertaining to the investigation to the group of people standing at the corner. The writer also referred to the vehicle as his (the suspects) then it was hers the victim. He also referred to the victim as Witness 1. I feel that he may have been a little repetitive in writing the report. The rewritten report:

On 3-7-07 at approximately 2239 hours, I received a radio call of a disturbance at 2555 Stark, apartment G, EL Fuego. Stated on the call was that the...