The Writing Center was very helpful with advice and with the links that they provided I was able to take advantage of them. They outlined all the things that I struggled with, such as, thesis statement and introduction and transitioning within body paragraphs. With the links they provided positive feedback on how to improve each finding. Within each finding, they explained the opportunity and gave a link for supporting evidence for the reference material. Throughout this assignment I learned how to expand my horizons more and try to think more out of the box. Three things I uncovered in my assignment were 1. Further development of topics 2. Smoother transition between the paragraphs either by using the word, same idea, or the same phrase in the start or in the end of the paragraphs to...