Com 156 Week 5 Assignment Revision Practice

Revision Practice

COM 156

Wk. 5 Assignment

There are several changes that can be made to this paper. The first change that can be made is in the first paragraph where it reads "and was thought to be a contender to earn an academy award nomination. Ultimately that honor was not bestowed on the film, "it could have read "with possibilities of an academy award nomination, but ultimately it did not receive this honor". Another possible change could be where it reads "but it's popularity and ability to elevate the comic book film, which is rarely associated with quality storytelling, remain" could read "It is a rare quality of storytelling that has the ability to elevate the comic book film's popularity the way this film did." Moving onto the second...