ENG-105: Module 7 Writing Self-Review Assignment

Name: Brian King Commentary Essay Topic: Commentary Essay Thesis Statement:

Please write a minimum of 100 words for each of the three questions below, describing the progress you have made in your writing. Make sure you proofread your self-review before submitting.

1. What changes or improvements did you make to your commentary essay rough draft? Identify specific parts of your paper that you revised. Why did you make these changes to your rough draft? (100 words minimum)

   The changes I made on my commentary essay topic was to attempt to revise needed information to insure my resources backed up my argument. I needed to change the heading of my topic and review all of the essay to make sure I had correct grammer and my essay...